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[Author's Note: I think it's good to change it to Phantom Thief rather than Phantom Thief Kid, right?]
Anime & Comics · Sothisq
thanks for the chap, as for recomendations for fight scenes, im no writer so i dont know the dificulties but have had fun reading them so i may have an idea of how to give advice, maybe you could put more focus on the actions, ir you could go ballistic with all details, but i would recomend a little bit of both, focus on simple movements when neded, and explain with more complex ones, tough balance would be sometimes hard to get you are doing a good job, maybe read some action focused fanfics to help yourself give more of an idea how you want it to look, hope this helps you
ch 0 6 Chapter 5: A Visit to UA
Anime & Comics · Grumper
thanks for the chapter, bear with my english please, the history is great and fun to read, to be honest i loved the first appeareance of reaper, it was epic for me, the part where he becomes like a kid was somewhat shocking but would rather he keep the reaper demeanor more, props for making him more human, for the rest of the cast it seems well, tough i could point you give them a little more light to them as a manner to connect to them could make their deaths more meaning full for us, is my tip, may it be helpfull
ch 30 Chapter 28 - Live well, Friend
Movies · TryingMyBest
mha vs covenant from halo, midoriya still with ofa just during the fight against shigaraki, the covenant pop into picture with a portal, that could be fun
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Anime & Comics · GlN
since we are talking cyberpunk, you could go with the knowledge of some sfci like star wars, titanfall or gundam, any of these can be a really impresive, or you could go with power, in that case someting along the lines of magneto could be op since everyone has cibernetics, solo lveling power could do the trick since is basically a war world or tecnomancer like the one in marvel, the girl from japan that can attach to herself machines and program them how she likes i believe is her power, been a while since last read a marvel comic to be honest, hope these can give some form of inspiration
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you could switch characters as you want, i love we dont get mineta at all, he always felt like an useless adition, theres always the option you could swap the clases seats as you feel would work more in favor of your FF
( A/N FYI Ibara was hella strong, i have no idea why she wasn't in Class A so ima switch Mineta for Ibara in this fanfic. If people find that a problem i'll switch it back but either way the side characters won't get that much light or they might no idea. Also Nagato is replacing the dude who talks to insects. )
MHA: Nagato
Anime & Comics · Devils_Requiem