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1. the character for the mc is good but the side character can be better the side character don't feel human all the time it feel like the Author want to get from A to B 2. Some plot hold like at the beginning the Orphanage pay a Martial Squire to fallen a tree but to pay a Martial Squire it take a lot of money to pay a Squire so how did a Orphanage pay a Martial Squire to fallen a tree when the Orphanage can't even pay to feed all the adult. 3. The World don't feet alive, it feel like the Author is doing everything just to move the plot. 4. at the beginning the author say only 30% to 20% of Martial Apprentice become Martial Squire but if that were the case then we should have seen it more Martial Squire graduate from the Martial school but you see no one graduate if just seen to me the world evolves around the MC. 5. the author drew out the story. if you keep on reading you will see a lot of move plot hold.

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It is good it is slow read get it a try. the story don't start until 40 to 50 it gets good. ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

it is a good novel in many way but the thing what made me dropped it was the Author made a lot of pointless Chapters, about random things and a lot of detail in chapters was not needed like the Author make one chapter about one things it got to the point it was annoying. or wen the Author make a half of the Chapters about how the mc just wake up with a girl.

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