Hot_Guy

Hot_Guy

2yr

Commented

bit short, try to add more paragraphs

ch 26 Darkness in Brightness(2): Trial (3)

Rebirth: Over the Horizon

Games · Stylish_Demon

Hot_Guy

2yr

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Rebirth: Over the Horizon

Games · Stylish_Demon

Hot_Guy

2yr

Posted

You have few grammar mistakes, other than that your way of writing is really good, I am a Doomsday genre lover so I am watching... Haha..( Only 10 chapters has been uploaded)

Rebirth: Over the Horizon

Games · Stylish_Demon

Hot_Guy

2yr

Commented

At least this system is something good

[Ding! Soul-body synchronization rate: 100%! Body unlocked. Body status is poisoned. Unable to move. AI support system initiated. Hello Alexander. I am your personal AI. Please give me a name.]

Alexander the Great Mage

Fantasy · mrant12

Hot_Guy

2yr

Commented

hmm. m

Alexander sat quietly in his lonely and dark world. Well, technically he wasn't sitting down since he was just a soul with no control over a body. But he liked to think that he was actually sitting down, cross-legged with his eyebrows scrunched up deep in thought.