Webnovel Author: KingCristo - Novel Collection

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It's an interesting premise I must say! The development is a strong build up to a soon powerful climax which I have yet to read. The design of the characters is superb. I love the details and description of each scene and scenario. I'd say the only thing you should do is break up your paragraphs and characters quotes. that's just about it. Besides that I've enjoyed giving this a short read!

lol of course! even if it is a personal preference you still execute the story with ease!

Overall the writing quality is decent and simplistic. Easy on the eyes and I'm not forcing myself to understand. I can tell the development is gonna be good for this one here but instead of telling what the story is gonna be about in the authors comment just let the flow happen and allow the story to take place instead of forcing what it's gonna be about. The readers are gonna want to figure it out for themselves. I'd say that's my one issue thus far so keep up the splendid writing my friend!

When I began reading this I honestly wasn't sure what to expect from this piece. And to admit, the development and the premise isn't bad! And I infact enjoyed! The development of this piece pulls you in almost immediately and shows a rather sad MC that you want to support and care for. The only issue I have to say with this book (and need I say this is a personal preference) this story is a system novel. I personally don't care for the idea of systems but this writer keeps the element through the book so I must admire that. So far I've enjoyed it and look forward to seeing how the author creates such a mighty MC in the end. Character development here we come!!!

Thank you so much for your review! I apologise for the grammar errors and mistakes. I'll check through and fix everything as soon as possible!

Thank you for the review! I appreciate the feedback you've given me! I hope you enjoy more in the future!

Writing quality is splendid. It's proper, to the point, and easy on the eyes. A first person point of view story telling, it's rare that I enjoy these because it leaves a lot of room for interpretation but the author pulls this off. The development. I wouldn't say is slow it's more, savory. you have to enjoy and take your time with this piece to absorb the full extent of this writing. Very well done, good work my friend!

To start off this review. In all honesty the world background, the characters description of who they are, that being followed by detail is actually rather nice. The story premise is interesting and gives a sort of game of thrones inspired vib. I'd say the one criticism I have over this is the writing quality. Sometimes the reader gets lost through the grammatical errors and spelling errors. Just a quick suggestion is to read through your work before posting it. Gramma and spelling is the first thing a reader sees when starting off, take your time, and enjoy correcting your mistakes. Besides that I believe this story has potential, just check through your work.

Thank you for your support and your thoughts brethren! I'll try my best to look over any sort of mistakes I might have missed! Any and all criticism is appreciated!

Splendid jeep at it! I look forward to more updates!

I have to start off this review saying this books writing quality, is impeccable! Perfect spelling so far, no grammatical errors. However the one criticism I have over writing is description. Description is good, but when there's to much of it, it gets out of hand and leaves nothing to the imagination. Besides that I love the description over the characters, they seem so beautiful, and likable so far as well. Certain areas are confusing as to whether it's a flashback or current time. So besides that this book is pretty epic this far and I'd suggest it to anyone who's looking for an assassin like story with elemental background!