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Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter.

Hey man Thanks for the chapter and happy holidays

loot for the Loot God junk for the Pawn shop is my new favirite quote

what do you mean forgot?

XD

I am not usually a fan of OP mc-s, since writers usually make them strong just because, no explanation no nothing. But there could be explanation in here for this, one og his past lives. Also I wonder what is the reason only he can see the panel

Nothing seemed odd just so you know. I wander what that parchament is, and what is the complete version of It going to give him.

Nice Boss. I like this wording style better than the last, I could make the sense of the fight more. But the boss felt a bit weak, and I couldnt really feel the danger from the corrosive fluid trap. Maybe If you killed one of the scared villigers, or let someone be damaged with the trap so It puts them out for the rest of the fight It would create more tension and It would feel more like a boss room and a difficult trial. But I still like the concept

I wonder how are those 2 worlds connected and what is Ray actualy

Dont worey about It, tho at this point everybody knows she is a ninja

Please do, I will use next power stones I get on this novel

I will, there very few novels that keep me engaged I hope my comment encourage you to keep writi g and countinue this story.

I like how we is using the braclet of gluttony. Plus add DWARFS please, maybe as one of the NPC-s like a blacksmith or something, It just need to be a dwarf

baldie raising flags left and right.I like this trap. I wonder who is going to go insane

Magic wooohoo. I wonder how was she able to be in contact with magic on Earth

Oh i like this braclet usually when people use gluttony for Items those Items can devour stuff to get stronger but this is a storage Item I likr It