It's worth a shot my man😂
"Can I stay here for a while?" He spoke in a relaxed and unhurried manner, despite knowing she might refuse. Especially, since he's a full grown man, and she's a woman.
Fantasy · Visionary_M
short yet captivating prologue 😊😊 awesome
"M… marry me," he added.
Fantasy · Visionary_M
😱😱😱😱😱😱
Alex is teleported to an unfamiliar, dark place once again. Tears drip from his eyes, and he bangs his head on the ground upon seeing Alice beheaded.
Fantasy · Itz_JayJ
I would suggest you revisit the paragraph, maybe something like along these lines "Before Alice and the young man could do anything, they were frozen in place by some imaginary power" 🤝
Before Alice and the young man can do anything, both are frozen in place by some imaginary power. The masked people began to chain both Alice and the young man with a peculiar chain that seemed to weigh extraordinarily heavy.
Fantasy · Itz_JayJ
I would suggest it reads "He was a normal human being who went through a journey full of adventure and tribulation, that shaped who he became to be" 😉
The hero was not always like that, they say. He was a normal human who went through a journey. It was full of adventures and tribulations that shaped the hero. The hero would then slay the evil dragon plaguing the land and his people. It is an impossible feat for any human, but that hero was no human. They say the hero lived happily ever after with his companions and love.
Fantasy · Itz_JayJ
Itz_JayJWay ahead of you😉... am greatful for the informative comment. Guess what, I was also thinking about the same, and I updated the chapter to include your line of thought 🤝
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Action · EEJ
Thank you very much your your time and feedback 😊
Good chapter, quality writing 😊
Immortal _ 0830 thank you for the review 😊 much appreciated 🤝
I love myself a good, well written romantic story. Kudos! you've captured my attention on this one 😁... Thought I was going to struggle through the first chapters as is usually the case when I read most romantic novels but no, I did not, on the contrary it looks like catch up with the author's update schedule in a day or two & that goes to say how fun and engaging the story is 😎✌️
I Wish I Could Love You
Fantasy · Visionary_M