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2021-07-06 Joined Global
Well said!
ch 20 Task one
Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
Her parents didn't leave the house - when l wrote family members, l meant like extended family members e.g aunts, uncles
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Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
Mei Qinghua is supposed to be in middle school but because she 'has no money', she's getting tutored at home. Most of her money is spent on clothes, makeup etc so that she looks expensive and fits in with the rich people
Furthermore, her background is very shady and it cannot be investigated easily - who would believe that a little girl who hasn't even gone to middle school can make connections so coincidentally with the sons of very powerful families? Such a thing cannot be a coincidence.
Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
It’s 120 points at least - its the bare minimum.
The teacher didn't respond at all and gave Bai Lianhua more demerits. She needed 120 merits to finish that semester and if she couldn't get them, she would have to repeat the class. Just now the teacher removed 5 points which meant her current points were 135 merits. This teacher is too much!
Fantasy · Concubinebeauty
So firstly, the writing quality is good and it's easy to understand the development of the story. Within 4 chapters, we can already see some adaption to the situation from the main character. However, there really is a lot of plot armour. Too many things happen by coincidence - l don't know whether this is good or bad but it's something to keep in mind. Apart from that, the world background is fairly simple but what makes the story stand out is the style of writing - it's very lighthearted and conversational. Really makes you feel like you're hearing a story instead of reading one. The character design is very good - it's very endearing to see a system story where the main character is not too overpowered from the start. I'm definitely going to keep reading this story to see how things go.
A villain's path to being a white lotus
Fantasy · SpicyChickenWriter