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ch 136 Chapter 122: A Threat to the world. 1900 CE
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sorry for the english, i don't even speak that language so right.
really looking better there are several flaws? in character development, I've seen this in many fanfics where the character is not a "person" but just a way for the story to be told showing amazing feats, but this not what you commented makes no sense, as far as I remember he said that the Mc would be at Arishem's discretion as well as other beings, I don't know if you're connecting the fact that the Mc lost his powers meant he has no reason to read the story or the fact that the author can do in quotation marks what he wants.
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ch 136 Chapter 122: A Threat to the world. 1900 CE
Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal
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