It seems like a lot is going in this teenager's life ! I hope Alana finds her way in life and finds the killer.
ch 0 9 CHAPTER NINE : High school Bullshit
Fantasy · Tasnime_7elb
You will one day. Keep up the good work !
So we know the killer is a woman and Alana's new adoptive mom is going to be killed too. Will it be by the same killer? Alana obviously knows something about her mom's murder but she's not sharing it, wonder what that is! Or maybe the killer is a man, and you just want us to think that it's a woman hahaha. Also, I'm curious about Alana's father. It looks like he's not in the picture. I'm guessing Selena is going to help Alana adjust to her new life and overcome the C-PTSD since she's a therapist. Alana is going to be happy for a while. Maybe she'll share something with her new mom that will get her killed? Looking forward to reading your next Chapter! Can't wait!
ch 0 5 CHAPTER FIVE : A new life is here Alina
Fantasy · Tasnime_7elb
I love this paragraph! I liked it when you referred to the murder as an incident and when you described Alana's feelings and said she was good at pretending. Way to go!
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Fantasy · Tasnime_7elb
I think the killer is someone from the sisters past. He wanted to kill Alana but her mother protected her and he killed her instead !
ch 0 8 CHAPTER EIGHT : Their new suspect
Unveiling Shadows
Fantasy · Tasnime_7elb