Aputure_Science

2yr

Commented

Beo please make that 9th episode/chapter man I'm bored

ch 0 7 One Night-Stand

Your Lie In April A Second Chance

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Aputure_Science

2yr

Commented

mmmmm diner yumy wat it kid?

From young, the value of respect is ingrained into every child's brain and body. Treat your elders with respect, treat the environment with respect, treat everyone with respect. If parents were to find out that their child did not have respect, the child would be in hot soup.

Reincarnated into Anime World

Anime & Comics · Spirits_everywhere

Aputure_Science

2yr

Commented

God what happened?

ch 0 -1 Chapter I - a brief start

Sword Art Online: Shadow Hero

Fantasy · iesu

Aputure_Science

2yr

Replied to jaevi

We all cry at Kaori's death. I knew they kill off the love interest but they do it in a way of penetrating your heart before exploding it. I started crying at episode 9 when Kousei was getting beat by his mom and him saying "I wish you would die" Saying something like that is the worst thing. Sad. At least we can see Kaori again in this Fan-Fic.

Your Lie In April A Second Chance

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Aputure_Science

2yr

Replied to Zulfikri_Fadly

To be honest, this might seem cold but we shouldn't have Tsubaki as a love interest. I think kinda staying to the original plot seems better

Your Lie In April A Second Chance

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Aputure_Science

2yr

Commented

Sad. Still pretty good for a start. A good thing maybe is to, add a lot more words. I noticed that this was a lot shorter than your older version of this Fan fic so yeah. This is just a suggestion. (can i put ma balls in yo jaws)

Seeing this obvious action of Kousei, Ryota understood that I'm interested in Kaori, he wasn't dense, he thought. 'I have never seen my friend interested in a girl, I guess I have to give up.'

Your Lie In April A Second Chance

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Aputure_Science

2yr

Posted

Mk. We are on the 7th chapter so, imma leave my first impression so far. Writing quality. It's improved a lot more and the story doesn't just go flat; Stability of updates: It's good so far, 7 chapters in I think about 1 week. Another thing, the chapters are pretty good length I'd say, maybe try to have a goal of 3K if not already. Suggestions: Do not make this a Harem for the love of God, Add some more references yeah, GJ (can i put my balls in yo jaws)

Your Lie In April A Second Chance

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Aputure_Science

2yr

Commented

The new version of your story is really good so far. The things I probably dont wanna see that was from the 1st version was the lottery thing and please for the love of god dont make this a harem.

ch 0 7 One Night-Stand