judith_ochola - Profile

Great story plot and development. Seems like Fanfic, sci-fi, mixed with dramatic twist. It's just so interesting to read over and over again.

I'd say the story's background is well developed. However, I can't say much as it's still being updated. Keep up the good work author. Developing such a story is kinda easy but keeping it going in an interesting manner sometimes proves to be difficult. I commend your work.

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VERY INTERESTING. THE STORY ITSELF FLOWS SO WELL 👍 THAT I CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAP. 3☺ Form a foster home to the biological mother. Then the story begins in a super manner in chapter 2. THRILLER HOUSE AND ALL THAT STUFF. IT JUST GETS JUICY AND EXCITING😂 WHAT'S NEXT? CAN'T WAIT! SOSO EAGER.

Good writing and composition. Character development, Story background and the writing quality itself are all super good I eagerly wait for the next chapter soon.