very good
ch 0 2 Memories of 'Luca'
Fantasy · YAOIGIRLFAN
are we going into creppy mode now like bad memories that would be pretty cool
ch 0 2 Memories of 'Luca'
Fantasy · YAOIGIRLFAN
this is pretty confusing but cool
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · YAOIGIRLFAN
this was pretty intresting tbh i liked it hope you have sucess in future
ch 0 4 Chapter 4
Fantasy · YAOIGIRLFAN
you kinda have some mistakes in writing but I'm pretty sure it was beacuse you were excited...well same you probably had so much in you're mind that you didn't wanna forget what you wanted to say so you made those mistakes but it's fine i understood most of what you were trying t o say and it's pretty nice good work
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Fantasy · YAOIGIRLFAN
the begining is kinda funny but it's cute 😌👍
ch 0 1 chapter 1
Fantasy · YAOIGIRLFAN
i feel like a geek or a nerd 👀👁👄👁
ch 0 4 Let's Call The Whole Thing Off!
Urban · AJZHEN
amazing good work 😌👍
ch 0 2 The First Meeting
Urban · AJZHEN
this actually pretty nice story i like the words you're using as a non eanglish speaker, I see eanglish launguage as beautiful and you pointed all of those words that I really enjoy hearing (I'm sorry for my bad eanglish I hope you understood i really put an affort in writing this thank you for reading)❤
ch 0 1 The Run Away Bride
Urban · AJZHEN
it's amazing good work!!
ch 0 5 Really? A Trap Room?
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
i don't know what to say anymore I'm just gonna enjoy