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deja vu
Undoubtedly, the Haiyue Cave Mansion held other treasures, but for now, Chen Fei placed them at the bottom of his priorities. Only by enhancing his own strength could those other items gain significance.
Cultivation: Start From Simplifying Martial Arts Techniques
Eastern · Eat More Fish
While direr is used correctly, I personally prefer more dire in instead.
The situation grew direr. The forthcoming confrontation would likely require immense resources, especially with the army of the three kings approaching. Before the battle even began, they could sense the encroaching desperation. They felt stretched too thin, even for beings of their stature.
My Two-sided Cultivation: Starting From Collecting Experiences
Eastern · The Swordman Loves Not Onion
I think fearlessly makes more sense here.
After making the comparison, he finally understood why Zhang Dagen was able to act so fearfully and still live well. Other than the protection of the Zhang family, it was also due to his terrifying strength.
My Two-sided Cultivation: Starting From Collecting Experiences
Eastern · The Swordman Loves Not Onion
You should switch the first 2 sentences.
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Earth's Greatest Magus
Fantasy · Avan
need to replace unable with able and would with could.
The Mortal Gate was hard to break, and countless people normally stopped there. If one was unable to break through the Mortal Gate, they would eventually become immortal.
I Stayed At Home For A Century, When I Emerged I Was Invincible
Eastern · Half a clear breeze
Sows are female. Boars are male.
The Sect Master forcefully suppressed his anger as he launched a barrage of curses at Ge Changqing inwardly. 'You f*cking bast*rd! F*ck your immortal as*! How dare you trample on my authority in Jiuyang Sect! I really want to rip you into pieces. No, I wish I could throw you into a pen filled with sows so they can violate you ten thousand times over!'
10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The Start
Eastern · Li Baijin
deja vu
"Why, thank you. It is set up by your Senior Brother, after all. That's like an assurance of quality!" Jiang Ming rocked the chair as he held a teacup in his hand from which he occasionally sipped.
10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The Start
Eastern · Li Baijin
the might be might be not feels awkward when I read it. maybe maybe not reads better imo.
Shrugging his shoulders, Song Yuxuang answered without any confidence, "Might be, might be not. I'm not sure. That place is very terrifying. Once you get close, your lifespan will be dwindling down in no time. I was very similar to the legendary Ancient Desolate Forbidden Zone."
Longevity: Starting by Trading My Lifespan with Supreme Exercise
Eastern · RebornAnew_author