Not trying to argue, just thought I’d point this stuff out. You’re not necessarily wrong, but not completely right either. He’s showing this information to get as much help as he can currently. The school isn’t trying to kill him, outside parties are. The old lady is his wife’s vassal. Also, he didn’t tell her about the system or the fact he gains all of his wife’s benefits. That’s a massive trump card. His main talent, while very high rank, is not meant for combat currently and they can help him get stronger faster with the information. He could have hid some things, but he isn’t really hurt by telling them either.
"I am having trouble believing it even after seeing it with my own eyes."
Games · FailedWriter101
I hope he starts using his magic in combat more. He’s got a bunch of affinities, it would be a waste if he only fights in melee.
I’ve been enjoying it.
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Fantasy · ApocalypseKnight
It’s understandable why he’s afraid of being found out. I just hope he realizes that it won’t last, and most likely, not very long. He needs to change his mentality so he’ll be able to protect himself, and his eventual ladies since the story is supposed to be a harem one. I’m also hoping that the future relationships can be a main focal point of the story, rather than a side note.
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Fantasy · ApocalypseKnight
Max is female.
Max let out a deep murmur and gently rubbed his head against Charles's chest, clearly trying to comfort him.
Fantasy · Yellowpuppy
I have enjoyed the story otherwise.
Author, please don’t keep having the MC act like that. It was fine when he was 11, but he’s now 16. His sister, who cares about him more than anyone else, doesn’t even know the real him because he’s been pretending so much. There’s a difference between occasionally having fun and doing it so much that the person you care about the most doesn’t even know the real you. It’s also pretty weird that the MC seems to be okay with that. Obviously, these are just my thoughts, but this fealt like it needed to be said.
The story is going great, just hoping the romance side of things gets more time and isn’t just a sidenote.
I’m liking the story so far, just wish the chapters were longer.
I’m hoping he sets some boundaries eventually.