Toufik_El_Ochy - Profile

In terms of writing, you are slightly above average, but in terms of developing the story, you are good and continue with steadfastness and a little good character design. He looks more like an ordinary trainee than a hero of the story, but I think you will change him after he gets out of the abyss. In general, this is my current assessment. I wish you success and continue on. Create chapters. [img=coins]

Good work in terms of writing, characters and events. As for the background of the world, it is also okay. It is a perfect novel of my favorite type, so I hope to raise the chapters quickly Very very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍