and there needs to be less blue prose
the author needs to give more spacing between paragraphs.
chat I want to remind y'all the author once "ran experiments on a rat once" in discord
The rest of his life had settled into a routine. His friends from school had moved on, consumed by their careers and families, while he remained alone. Relationships were difficult for him. Most people didn't understand his obsession with animals, or they saw it as a quirk that didn't quite fit into their vision of a shared future. So, he poured his love and attention into the creatures who couldn't speak back but always understood in their own way.
HP: A Moment of Magic
Others · DeathSeekerWN
good writing
The sky was a soft gray, as if the world itself couldn't decide whether to rain or stay still. He walked briskly down the cracked sidewalk, his breath visible in the cool morning air. It was just another ordinary day. The office loomed ahead—a sterile, boxy building that never seemed to fit into the scenery. He had walked this route for years, watching the seasons change, but nothing in his routine ever truly shifted.
HP: A Moment of Magic
Others · DeathSeekerWN
aRe you sure you want cambysees to be an insecure bitch needing constant reaffirmations, such characters bring down reading experience and even irl such girls are so annoying to deal with
fuckig knew this the moment her mom was gone I knew it's gonna turn into a bs cultivation story
"You've grown, I wish our Mistress can see this" I heard a faint voice behind me, which made me turn my head.
Neurolink System in the Modern World
Urban · InnocentFox
there is gonna be some mysterious cultivation shit
thanks for the chapter
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kind of overdoing it here
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purple*
HP: A Moment of Magic
Others · DeathSeekerWN