Michael_Huntsalot

When the dazzled crowd opened their eyes again, all that remained of the giant Nucnar were his smoking feet. The rest of his body and his Spirit Body had been obliterated.

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

Michael_Huntsalot

1yr

Replied to Varyag

Full metal panic anyone?

The issue that had afflicted Khan for so long ended up being a minor problem. He didn't know how to feel about that revelation. All his plans and paranoia vanished when he understood how easy it was to get condoms in the Global Army.

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

Michael_Huntsalot

1yr

Posted

Please think of logistics of rebuilding a town in a month there is no need to make it that unbelievable. If it took a half a year then it may not sound too insane. Over all not bad, but slow down and think of how to flesh out setting and characters in the story.

Demonic Raven in the Magus World

Fantasy · RavenMaster

Michael_Huntsalot

1yr

Posted

God I could cut myself with edge in this story. The protagonist is overly cruel and acts as a murder hobo. It tries to play it as him being cold and calculating, but he just a asshole. The author just throws in random settings together with out fleashing out the story first. All and all it’s a hot mess. I’ve read about 30ch and I don’t see it getting better from here.

Super Necromancer System

Fantasy · John_Doever

Michael_Huntsalot

1yr

Posted

This Novel is like junk food not particularly great, but good enough. The system is just randomly there because god felt bad for the MC. It needs more of a struggle and harder work on the MC part and there not exploring the fact that he can speak any and all languages and that includes monster.