Diana_Dutta

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Diana_Dutta
Diana_Dutta
4 years ago
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The story seems alright although it's a bit too one dimensional. It needs some layers , I suggest you read some novels first and focus on grammer and writing which could be adjusted with a bit of proof read. I'm looking forward to more:-)