The story seems alright although it's a bit too one dimensional. It needs some layers , I suggest you read some novels first and focus on grammer and writing which could be adjusted with a bit of proof read. I'm looking forward to more:-)
Realistic · Soumaditya_Roy
The story seems alright although it's a bit too one dimensional. It needs some layers , I suggest you read some novels first and focus on grammer and writing which could be adjusted with a bit of proof read. I'm looking forward to more:-)
Why she bullies me??
Realistic · Soumaditya_Roy