I think this novel has great potential. The concept is really good! There are parts of the writing that feels a little awkward to me because of some switching between formal and informal. But overall, the writing is great. I really like the characterizations. Though the book does read a bit like a script, it has elements of novel and the details added in definitely sell it beyond a script and as a book.
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I think this novel has great potential. The concept is really good! There are parts of the writing that feels a little awkward to me because of some switching between formal and informal. But overall, the writing is great. I really like the characterizations. Though the book does read a bit like a script, it has elements of novel and the details added in definitely sell it beyond a script and as a book.
Seraphim: The Chronicles of Universe
Fantasy · UnitedEmCee