Webnovel Author: Yamashita_Kaito

Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

Commented

Can't wait to read more, hope you're enjoying the holiday season!

ch 239 Victoria's Scandal!

The Abandoned Husband Dominates

Urban · I Have Something To Say

Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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Been really enjoying the novel. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]

ch 212 Terrifying Jordan!

The Abandoned Husband Dominates

Urban · I Have Something To Say

Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

Replied to GrumpyGuy

appreciate the input, yeah was thinking of touching on the academy period with flashbacks now and then, also planned on having some supporting nobility down the road. Probably touch on it a bit in volume three, finished writing volume two yesterday just have to go back and edit the drafts.

ch 18 Chapter One: Graduation

Chronicles of a Holy Knight

Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito

Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

Replied to tanu_sam

I was hoping people would like the accents <3

"What if I be tellin ya when ye go ta sleep tonight ye could wake up wit a whole new life" the old man said in all seriousness, before the young man's eyes the old fellow shifted, his back straightened his hair blackened and the bright glow from his eyes became more intense.

Chronicles of a Holy Knight

Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito

Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

Replied to tanu_sam

thanks I must have missed that in editing :D

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Chronicles of a Holy Knight

Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito

Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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Very well written, found a few typing errors here and there but they didn't take away from the story at all. suggest going back and finding them whenever you have free time. First book i've read on here that made me feel emotion for the characters being written about. Can't wait to see what happens with Lucan and hope to see Iris in the future. :D

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Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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Really enjoyed reading this will have to come back when you have more chapters available :D

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Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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theres a couple spots here where the word conscience is used, i think the word you meant to use was consciousness. could be wrong though

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Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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right in the feels :D

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Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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Really feel bad for Iris, she was a good person but her situation destroyed her.

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Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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hopefully that unfit abusive parent got what he deserved

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Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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nice teacher, a lot of them will just ignore a situation like that considering it to much of a hassle.

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Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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absolutely beautiful description

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Yamashita_Kaito

2yr

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Really liked how you explained the mafia's organization early on usually when I come across a term I don't know anything about google it. Your characters are well written and the story development keeps readers interested. There are typing errors here and there but don't take away from the story much (haven't had to re-read sentences a few times till I get it). Will definitely be back to read more in the future, excellent work. :D