zenkedo

I get it that the exposition is important but it's a bit of a let down when you come for a chapter and find a filler. Especially in a work this good. But, you gotta do what you gotta do. Keep up the good work.

ch 82 The living fears the uncertainty of death

Traveler's Traveling Companion

Video Games · Evfrnet

zenkedo

9mth

Commented

This whole paragraph reeks of Senator Armstrong for me.

The older student became enraged at the accusation, "Well, I HAD TO DO SOMETHING! All I wanted was to build a better world, where everyone is equal. You've seen it, haven't you? How the muggleborns are still considered peasants, and how little room they have to rise in our society. I want to give them opportunities to start their own families, their own crests. I wanted to create a society without any good or evil, only power."

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

zenkedo

9mth

Commented

This was great. Thanks~~~~~~

ch 80 Don’t let slip what’s firmly in your grasp

Traveler's Traveling Companion

Video Games · Evfrnet

zenkedo

10mth

Commented

You like to see scenes go this hard. Thanks for the chapter.

ch 78 The best trade deal in the history of trade deals

Traveler's Traveling Companion

Video Games · Evfrnet

zenkedo

10mth

Posted

This is a plagiarized work. Please, report it. It's not only of poorer quality, it's also makes the og author's life harder. SO I once again ask you to report this and go on with your day, knowing that you did something good.

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zenkedo

1yr

Commented

Шпик, друг, я думал у тебя там ноут умирает, а ты вон какой финт решил провернуть. Тут я это читать, конечно, не буду, но рад видеть что расширяешься.

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zenkedo

1yr

Commented

Thanks~~~~ I can almost see Shikibu as a caster. As far as casters go she isn't the best, but as far as personalities go MC and her are very compatible.

ch 0 4 Chapter 3: New Normal

Draw of the Cards

Anime & Comics · Grim_Genesis

zenkedo

1yr

Commented

Roland, my man, is that you?

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Draw of the Cards

Anime & Comics · Grim_Genesis

zenkedo

1yr

Commented

You are forgiven. By me, at least. Can't say if the rest will.

ch 55 Get me out of this place

Traveler's Traveling Companion

Video Games · Evfrnet

zenkedo

1yr

Commented

Mishaps like this happen. When you try to write the plot, but end up writing FLUFF. Don't blame you tho, it came out really nice.

ch 25 The inner machination of their minds are an enigma

Traveler's Traveling Companion

Video Games · Evfrnet

zenkedo

1yr

Commented

Sora - Sky. it doesn't sound cringy, does it?

On another note, anyone got a Jap name that don't sound cringy as all hell? I need one cause using one of the names I usually use would be canonically incorrect.... This isn't related to this story in case you're wondering.