Webnovel Author: Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Posted

It has a great beginning with the story. The author has meticulously explained the dire situation in which mc was placed. It awoke pity for the people in that world as well as mc's family.

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Commented

what a great start 💥

Flames raged everywhere. Screams resounded through the air and filled the area with pure terror.

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Commented

ch 0 2 Goodbye, Academy!

Alicole Chronicles: Unexpected Quest Duo

Fantasy · AlicoleChronicler

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Replied to AlicoleChronicler

turned vampires or human-converted vampires can do with human food for two or three days.

ch 24 His Highness orders to leave him alone

Mystery of a Hidden Vampire

Fantasy · Rubindeepkaur

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Commented

So much energy 😮

The king slammed his fist down on the table. The dishes jumped up a considerable distance in the air before settling back down again. A large crack in the table ran from the place it was hit right to its very center.

Alicole Chronicles: Unexpected Quest Duo

Fantasy · AlicoleChronicler

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Commented

beautiful description 😍

A dark, gloomy castle towered against a crimson evening sky high on a mountain cliff. The sun was just about to bid farewell for the day. It showered the surroundings with all the light and energy its rays still had in them. The deep blue ocean waters rushed toward the shore in large, unruly waves. They broke against the sharp edges of the rocks beneath the castle walls with a fierce roar. Drops of water soared into the salty air, and thick foam formed as the water crashed against the rocks.

Alicole Chronicles: Unexpected Quest Duo

Fantasy · AlicoleChronicler

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Replied to AlicoleChronicler

There is a danger in Sophia's path. She better stay with Edward 😊

ch 18 Sophia maintains distance with the Vampire

Mystery of a Hidden Vampire

Fantasy · Rubindeepkaur

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Replied to AlicoleChronicler

Edward learnt magic during his hundred years of the vampire ship. He rarely uses his magic, but when he uses it, no one can deny him being the most powerful vampire of time.

ch 21 Walking through the dungeons

Mystery of a Hidden Vampire

Fantasy · Rubindeepkaur

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Replied to AlicoleChronicler

just like the vampire diaries : damen and stefen

ch 19 "I am Edward Hamilton II"

Mystery of a Hidden Vampire

Fantasy · Rubindeepkaur

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Posted

I like the author's choice of vocabulary. The most interesting aspect of the story was keeping a simple starting and building a twist in between. I wish him goodluck for Wsa 😊

CREATION GOD

Fantasy · inner_pa1n

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Commented

she is kind and understanding.

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My Yearn

Fantasy · Elixer_Yuu

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Posted

The word choice of the author is perfect! No one can deny that the beginning of the story is so interesting that it leaves readers going in-depth reading the tale. The author has a higher chance of taking off his book, provided he writes more engaging chapters.

My Yearn

Fantasy · Elixer_Yuu

Rubindeepkaur

1yr

Replied to AleeqaC

wait and watch😅

" Yes, I have. But what's the use of having a brother when he can't stand with me in hard times. He rarely meets me, and when he visits me, he asks me to leave this palace and come with him to rejoice in the human civilisation. He works with humans and has a great mansion there. No one suspects him as a vampire and he resides as a free soul, untamed, unharmed and respected.