Badges 6
Moments 5
2yr
Commented This is quite interesting so far. Though there were times I was kinda mixed up it was enjoyable nonetheless. I was able to fully imagine the story while I was reading it and the fact that the imagery wasn't disrupted means you did a good job in keeping it well-paced. overall its an enjoyable story, there are some grammar errors but apart from that good job. 8.5/10
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Eastern · Black_Lotus99
2yr
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ch 0 1 The Unknown
Records of Rebirth
Fantasy · EternalNightLotus
It was a pretty good story overall, there were some points where I was confused and some grammar issues but overall it was good. Keep improving and writing and you'll do great.
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Sci-fi · Joyon