Leon_Harris_5385

2mth

Commented

Looking forward to where is story is going So far your character is quite interesting. I also like the system so far

ch 0 4 —[Chapter 4]—

The Gamer Series: Stranger Gamer.

TV · Faceless_Prick

Leon_Harris_5385

4mth

Posted

Now that the story is getting going, with character interactions, the recent chapters, 7 onwards are quite enjoyable. I've deleted my old review, as now people can keep reading after the initial power building. Looking forward to what comes next

Unique Gamers Travels

TV · ArtoriaPendragon_

Leon_Harris_5385

6mth

Commented

I really enjoying how this story is going. I'm looking forward to Freya meeting the family

ch 41 Chapter 1.40

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Leon_Harris_5385

6mth

Posted

I went in thinking It would be a guy from the 21st century interacting the the Orville crew. It was not. The is not character interaction, they main character is bland with not personality and doesn't interact with anyone. There is also no connection to the story of the tv show.

Orville: New Horizons

TV · Xoran

Leon_Harris_5385

8mth

Posted

While this story can be good, it completely ignores marvel. Multiverse fan fictions are fine, and this one is written mostly well, however the title and picture both suggest it will at least be centered around marvel and expand to the multiverse. This should really be listed as a stargate-multiverse fic

Bastard Of Thanos

TV · Level1Goblin

Leon_Harris_5385

9mth

Commented

I'm really liking what you are doing. The fact that you are willing to change this from the original plot is great. An idea would be to give Elena a reality check about the Salvator brothers.

ch 26 Inspiration

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Leon_Harris_5385

10mth

Commented

Defiantly not

No

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Leon_Harris_5385

10mth

Commented

I don't think bonnie Klaus would work, she is probably the one who hates Klaus the most

ch 21 Poll

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Leon_Harris_5385

10mth

Commented

Freya With his knowledge he can free her early and it means Rebecca will still be able to follow canon when you want

ch 20 Poll { Closed }

TVD: The Tribrid Legacy

TV · ParadiseHeights

Leon_Harris_5385

1yr

Commented

I am really enjoying your story. I think the power progression has really worked for the story. Hope you keep writing

I write this because I want to. I made my MC weak at the start because I wanted him to fake-die to go to Valhalla and grow as a person along the way. I "only" saved thousands of regular humans, Maya Hansen, Tony, Pietro, Nat, a few widows, and countless Asgardians because that's all a fucking teenager could possibly ever do. Rant over. Fuck you.