readerproof2322 - Profile

The story is great, i just saw it go from 99 to 109 episodes in one day. I think the story would in many places benefit from more detail, since it's about conveying an already existing thought world to readers. So then when i only find out important details after half an episode i'm gonna have to retcon my version of the fantasy world because i only found those things out later. Otherwise this is great because of the frequent updates and i after 2 days of reading am now at chapter 90 will start to proofread because i want to be of use. I already get this story for free so i'm gonna give back what i can. What astounded me though was the enormous amount of people who supposedly read the story already, about 400 thousand at this instant, compared to the amount of reader participation. The only problem i have with the story sometimes is that the links are basically useless by themselves since they can't be copied and the embeds on a comment on that link's paragraph stopped at some point in the story.