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Хорошая глава, жду продолжения)

Спасибо за главу, жду продолжения) Думаю, что превратить часть армии в камень, не увидив даже части рыжих волос - это хороший способ деморализовать противника)

Спасибо за твой тяжёлый труд, автор! Замечательная история!

I don't think taking hogyeku is a good idea. Yes, it will give him a ton of power and ability, but he already has an incredibly strong foundation. By the time of the battle, Yhwach will be strong enough to at least not lose. If there is a hogyoku, then just like any other bleach story, the character will become too powerful for their universe. This situation can lead to the fact that the main character will not fight with opponents, but will simply show how much stronger he is than everyone else until the end of the plot. But this is just my opinion, it’s up to you, author, how to develop the story)

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Thanks for the chapter. I don’t know why, but it’s funny for me to imagine how the heroes will scare each other with threats of going to the “Field of Punishment” in the kingdom of Hades.

It is important to have a waifu for the main character) He seems a little lonely. I'm all for bleach.

Friend, write this story the way you see fit. Don't listen to the haters, I personally like everything. Chapters with construction, showdowns with the family and simple interactions between characters are a pleasure to read. It's nice to see that the main character is not just chasing power around the world, but is also engaged in other activities. I'm waiting for new chapters)

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the height of the totem is seven meters, is this the size of the house? Or scaling is lame?

I'm no expert, but didn't the arc reactor poison Tony because it saved him from shrapnel? Why does he keep using it?

Author! I have a question! You put "!" at the end of every sentence! Is there a reason for this?! I'm certainly not complaining! The plot is interesting! But! It's a little distracting! And knocks down the mood!