How will he both save her and kill her?
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Fantasy · Aescwine
She looked at them not he. You should go through and correct grammatical errors like this
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Fantasy · AlexanderCao
Isn't it Haley causing trouble for Harley? You wrote it in reverse
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Fantasy · AlexanderCao
Hi Ava, I am already on Goodnovel. Please check
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Master Descends for a Stroll
Eastern · Kalki_gsk
Thank you so much. Keep reading !!
epiccccc scene
Then Nike's body rises to the surface. He continued to rise, revealing a hand, then an arm, followed by the upper body of Mwene. His dislocated arm held up his best friend. His left eye was closed and bleeding. Pain coursed through his veins like disease. He could taste nothing but metal in his mouth. He could barely hear as the ringing returned but in spite of all of that he wouldn't quit. As long as he could breathe, he could fight back.
Sci-fi · Ozymandias007i
Make sure there is proper paragraphing. The flow of eye is blocked whe there are really big paragraphs
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Sci-fi · Ozymandias007i
you have already messaged me and i have taken a contract from gn as well
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Journey to Dai Shan Forest
Eastern · Kalki_gsk
Jesusssss.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Reforging the body
Eastern · Kalki_gsk
Will update the paragraphing. Thanks for the feedback
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Master Descends for a Stroll
Eastern · Kalki_gsk
What do you mean torture? I'm assuming this a compliment that I write well? :D
"That...That is the purest Yang Qi I have ever seen. Even the sect master does not have Yang Qi that is this pure."
Sovereign of the Gods
Eastern · Kalki_gsk