DanLock21

1yr

Posted

Excellent read so far. Good world building, characters are actively fleshed out and worked on, however, hopefully the development thus far and future development of the characters is remembered/kept in mind by the author in the future when drawing up plot lines. Unique story that is interesting to read and looking forward to where it goes.

Super-Soldier in Another World: Book Two: The Fiendwood

Fantasy · Nivilack

DanLock21

2yr

Commented

CanT help but think the author has his OwN personal issues with male familial fiugres wiTh how flimsy and one-dimensional He portays the rEasoning for not trusting or feeling like his brothers are family.

Tista had to put up a façade every time Trion was around, but she soldiered on bravely. Being sick was second nature to her, sometimes she even fooled Lith and her parents with her acting.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

DanLock21

2yr

Replied to Tuocs

For real, the author sows distrust among such Young siblings with faulty reasoning that any family unit would never act like, even more so in a world liKe this, where The only ones you can and sHould trust is family.

Tista had to put up a façade every time Trion was around, but she soldiered on bravely. Being sick was second nature to her, sometimes she even fooled Lith and her parents with her acting.