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Finally a good One Piece fic after a long time, the pacing is steady, the MC is strong and smart, his "golden finger" or trap doesn't make him OP instantly so there is progress for both him and his crew and the character interaction is good. Keep up the good work author!

There are few chapters, the author is doing a good job with the fic, the pace of the fic is nice and slow but it's just the beginning; the author is taking his time to introduce MC in the world, meanwhile he is preparing and improving his skills.

What's the fic in Spanish?

It's Jord, quality is guaranteed. 5 stars.

The story is quite slow, but entertaining. The author already has experience translating and updates are frequent.

The novel is entertaining, easy to follow and read. The MC is not stupid, nor weak in character, he has confidence in himself; Although he is a bit SIMP with strange women, I wouldn't complain if it were at least his harem but he is capable of risking his life for women he doesn't know (Jeanne and Morgana) but that he develops throughout of history. Now for the minor complaints or details that could have been better. Strange plot twists (not for the better) or inconclusive, at first the story had a decent pace to tell the story of his world and his characters but there are also strange decisions that make the viewer question the author's intelligence. Example: Annasthashia, I have to say I didn't like her "plot twist" of her being able to escape all the blame and have a chance to redeem herself. Furthermore, her "actions" to demonstrate her change only remain empty words where the MC has to help her and then she is left as the horny one of the group. Also, her "bad" personality is now her own person and I'm pretty sure she'll be included in the harem too. Although the author would introduce another controversial character later, as is the case of Aphrodite, where this time I can say that she at least has her deserved place in the story and in the MC's family and all because of her own actions. I will also mention that the MC wanted 7 (8) Maidens that represent the deadly sins. Although I'm not a fan of any of them except Kaguya and Roxanne, it was something that fell in the middle and nothing. Harem too extensive and underdeveloped (the extras). First, I'll say I'm a fan of the harem, but when half of these women are just there to fill in words and do nothing relevant, that's where I stop. I can quickly name those who deserve their place in the harem: 1. Violet 2. Ruby 3.Sasha (She is only because she is part of the main premise) 4.Kaguya. 5.Scathach 6. Natalia 7.Mizuki 8.Aphrodite 9.Jeanne 10.Haruna 11.Roxanne 12.Zaladrac 13.Pepper 14.Leona 15.Tasha. More compact and everyone contributes to the MC and vice versa. Eleonor and Agnes could be on the list, but if they weren't I wouldn't bother either. All the good women and all the bad men (except the MC). With very, very, very, very few exceptions, I honestly already expected MC to forgive Athena in Medusa/Roberta's revenge. Strange growth line. The MC during 95% of the work grew rapidly but the growth was "credible" but suddenly, he only gets Power Up after Power Up. While his wives "try" to reach him without success because he is already older than the planet, wiser than Solomon and is the strongest in his world. Wasted characters. Scathach for so long the novel has been promoting this great woman so that in a fight where she can give it her all yes, only for Victor to steal all the limelight (again) but at least she had her moment to shine. Vlad, apart from being a bad father and being a cuckold, did almost nothing in the novel and at this point he will no longer do anything relevant. Ruby, Violet and Kaguya. The poor are so far behind in the power ladder that it is sad. They are the Yamcha while Victor is the Broly SSJ (Super) Sasha. After 900 chapters, the author barely wants to do anything with her. Victor. I liked it better when he was just an accident that should never have happened in the supernatural world (a second progenitor) but the story seems to lead to the fact that everything he did and will do is destined in some way. Also, his personality is very changeable and his "values" are worth the same as toilet paper in a public bathroom. I'll end here, I know most of it is me criticizing the novel, but that doesn't make it a bad read, this novel is superior to many on this platform with all the "details" I mentioned.

With Jord the quality of the story is assured. 5 Stars

I can delete this review later, I just wanted to ask what the point of this is, I mean I read in the comments that the MC seems to be someone known to the various girls that appear, Yor even slept with him, that wouldn't matter to me except for the fact that he did it thinking the MC is Loid and it seems like the girls will go off into their own worlds never to return (unintentional NTR I guess). So not being negative but other than the occasional +18, is there anything else?

I got bored of reading, the childhood saga is a sleeping pill and there is nothing that motivates me to read this