I feel like Gary should have hidden this as a Trump Card and some other skills he has. Gary I belive, needs a little more internal conflict to really develop. Presently he is still discovering the world but how is it changing him? Yes he gets stronger physically, but what of mentally. He needs something really damaging to his health to progress. I feel like Gary needs some level of tragedy. He needs something that is truly unexpected to happen to him.
ch 510 New Skill Activated
Fantasy · JKSManga
I love the word play here...
The first punch was dealt with a style of hard and soft. The whole body of the soldier was flicked over the shoulder, and then he was punched in the temple, making him fall in love with the elastic floor of the combat ring.
Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH
Like, do we look stupid or something...? Do you even know what electromagnetic waves are...?
One of the twins nodded and flew in the sky and started looking around the forest by using electromagnetic waves and sonar waves. He detected something huge coming their way and his face darkened after looking at who it was. [Auth:- because of the mutation, they have received various kinds of abilities like these, pretty OP]
Fantasy · KimChangMin
This thing the author does by messing with the words is cute for the first 2 chapters but now it's stupidly annoying 😒
The girl got stunned for some reason at the time all of that happened, the moment she came to her senses, she ran outside and screamed "Chotto Matte" (Auth:- ;)) "Please Wait!!!"
Fantasy · KimChangMin
I like that the author likes to add he's own comments, thoughts and all but it's really annoying.... I swear down, the thing dey vex me.... Like guy, nah your book Oh... I get, but abeg, stop am e dey vex person
Mal saw her acting like a child who just got her favorite toy, he barely stopped himself from patting her head, 'this girl I must proteccc he thought.' (Auth:- JK Lol)
Fantasy · KimChangMin
It's the hidden joke for me
'This one should be a female,' Khan thought while recalling the information found on the network. 'Our sexual organs aren't compatible, but I can differentiate them from the size of the chest. Female Ef'i usually have a smaller torso.'
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Where do people like you pop-out from, like how much talent can someone have... Oga, abeg, when God the shear talent, make I ask....? You collect extra...?😞 Because I know see how someone Good the write masterpiece series the call am 'Book'... No be juju be that...? 🤨
ch 38 Training.
Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH
Me too....
ch 0 3 Return of the Fallen Angel
War · ArkAnghel
Too slow, I already did
ch 0 1 Mission Over
War · ArkAnghel
It's good yes, no doubt, but its just "a little" (might I say) wired... The story line is grave but u give too much emphasis on the weapons and forget to describe the appearance, location, movement, plan and team We know they are the best team in the whole Marine Corp but, why are they the best, is it in combat, coordination, planning, execution, strategy and all that... You need to help us answer certain questions to truly grasp the book and immerse ourselves in the book... Its the little details that make the whole An ocean is nothing more than very large accumulation of water drops.... I honestly mean no ill to the writer or his or her hopes but I honestly wish that they practice more... P.l check your grammar, its a little mixedish...your write formally informal, you should check and see.....you could try to use GRAMMARLY and write so you could easily spot the errors .... In all in all, you are a great writer with a wonderful story I continue to read your work
ch 0 1 Mission Over
War · ArkAnghel
But how much can he learn in order to grow and survive, since the system can take any little action, amplify it, and class it as a skill..?
ch 0 9 Improve, Adapt, Overcome.
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
I'd really love to see how far he can grow
ch 0 9 Improve, Adapt, Overcome.
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
Okay, the book is hard but yet simple...... it's not that it uses too many words or something like that, but it's this whole 4th dimension thing that's confusing me......but there again, it's only Chapter 6 and still has plenty of room to grow. I honestly think you all should try and read it, it's really creative and it's truly different from all the other novels and mangas and comics out there It is not easy to make a note much less write a book, so I dearly congratulate this writer saying "Thank You so much" for bringing us such a wonderful pice
ch 0 6 Chapter 6
Fantasy · om1st0
What type of long name is that one.....is it medicine or some type of Latin spell
[Soul Link Complete. The Nephilim Sealing Temple of Kyros Soter Vasilius Tyrannos Kyriachos is now online.]
Fantasy · Rapture_Tales
As in guy..... I thought I was the only one. Maybe she'll be brought back later after experimentation and all that type of stuff
ch 510 New Skill Activated
My Werewolf System
Fantasy · JKSManga