Bichael - Profile

As in guy..... I thought I was the only one. Maybe she'll be brought back later after experimentation and all that type of stuff

I feel like Gary should have hidden this as a Trump Card and some other skills he has. Gary I belive, needs a little more internal conflict to really develop. Presently he is still discovering the world but how is it changing him? Yes he gets stronger physically, but what of mentally. He needs something really damaging to his health to progress. I feel like Gary needs some level of tragedy. He needs something that is truly unexpected to happen to him.

Where do people like you pop-out from, like how much talent can someone have... Oga, abeg, when God the shear talent, make I ask....? You collect extra...?😞 Because I know see how someone Good the write masterpiece series the call am 'Book'... No be juju be that...? 🤨

The way the book is written it looks, sounds and feels like a summary. Don't get me wrong, the story is beyond mind but the write needs to write the story and not the summary.

There writer your typing in both present and past tense at the same time and its a little confusing at times. You also tend to stop a sentence before it is completed.... But it keeps on getting great

Me too....

Too slow, I already did

It's good yes, no doubt, but its just "a little" (might I say) wired... The story line is grave but u give too much emphasis on the weapons and forget to describe the appearance, location, movement, plan and team We know they are the best team in the whole Marine Corp but, why are they the best, is it in combat, coordination, planning, execution, strategy and all that... You need to help us answer certain questions to truly grasp the book and immerse ourselves in the book... Its the little details that make the whole An ocean is nothing more than very large accumulation of water drops.... I honestly mean no ill to the writer or his or her hopes but I honestly wish that they practice more... P.l check your grammar, its a little mixedish...your write formally informal, you should check and see.....you could try to use GRAMMARLY and write so you could easily spot the errors .... In all in all, you are a great writer with a wonderful story I continue to read your work

But how much can he learn in order to grow and survive, since the system can take any little action, amplify it, and class it as a skill..?

I'd really love to see how far he can grow

I don't understand why this is not a daily recommendation for all readers irrespective of they genre of interest... From the very few chapters I've read so far, the book seems slow but is actually fast, not that it's noticeable, but it's all in good time Mystery seems to be d dominant theme as it's driven from the very beginning to this point on.....Who knows? Would we find out wat happened years ago or r we to find even more questions than answers...?

Okay, the book is hard but yet simple...... it's not that it uses too many words or something like that, but it's this whole 4th dimension thing that's confusing me......but there again, it's only Chapter 6 and still has plenty of room to grow. I honestly think you all should try and read it, it's really creative and it's truly different from all the other novels and mangas and comics out there It is not easy to make a note much less write a book, so I dearly congratulate this writer saying "Thank You so much" for bringing us such a wonderful pice