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Oh man, if you don't have the butterfly effect, what's the point of MC? You could have gotten him into a relationship with Clarke or Octavia for the sake of drama. Anyway, better luck in the future, don't give up.

I have a question: will you still only upload one chapter per day?

I read the entire novel Shadow Slave, and I admire the way you write. I just want to give you my point of view. Do not make MC too strong too quickly. Give him time to grow and greater risks than the novel to make it balanced. I really like his character, so no comments. I hope you continue and I will support you as much as I can.

The story is very nice but if you can keep write you can make a very good novel and i read it all .........

I just hope you keep going and finish it

A very nice narration and your background about the world is good. I hope you will complete this work