Moments 3
2yr
Commented
By the time Mrs.Roy heard his voice, Gaurav's face was wet. She spattered a mug of water on his face. Water was dripping from his hair drop by drop, and he spitted out the water which got into his mouth when he was shouting by making a small gap between his lips and said, " Mom, I am awake " in a sarcastic way.
Best For The Beast
Fantasy · DarkBlaze
2yr
Commented 1st episode is good. I am looking forward for the 2nd one
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Best For The Beast
Fantasy · DarkBlaze
If you improve the way of writing may be your story has a good potential to reach the top. I will be waiting for the next updates. I want to know what happened in that incident [img=recommend]
Best For The Beast
Fantasy · DarkBlaze