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DaoistyNyxQ4
LV 3Just a mediocre author writing for fun
2021-08-02 Joined GlobalBadges 6
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totally forgot Ii decided to delete everything but sure.
Deletion commences tomorrow.
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
ya sorry should've made it more thrilling
ch 0 1 reworked prologue
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
nooo- don't read it yet, if you reach the lattest chapter you'll know that I'm planning a third rewrite from scratch but it's better to wait.you could read if you still want to tho, I've been told it gets boring
do you guys like it?
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
I'm gonna be honest probably gonna take a year or two, been reading a few other novels to get inspiration from.I might post occasional chapters once in awhile but I would rather do a mass release at once, the prologue was experimental.but in the meantime why don't you read some novels to, the one I'm currently reading is pretty good the writing style is amazing and the protagonist is just so interesting.if you don't mind reading novels then try reading Salvos(a monsters evolution litpg)it's a fantasy based novel on a demon's point of view in a fantasy world with a system .plus, it also helped me realize that maybe I should put more inner dialogue, thoughts between conversations instead of looking at it from someone else's pov.
ch 0 1 reworked prologue
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
I'm trying to rework/write it from the ground up so I woudnt continue reading until i do that.
I tried my best to re-edit it.
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
ya sorry reworking the story a third time so suggest not reading it until i do, the third rework is me rewriting it all by hand and making the story more consistent and orderly
7 After math(re-edited-punctuation)
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
ah quite a really good solution, shame i was already writing a third rework tho.(you could continue reading the story but I'm planning to rewrite it entirely from hand to make it more consistent)
(Note: No his not gay or bi if you're thinking this then no you're wrong I'm putting this here to make people not misunderstand the MCs sexuality his straight)
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
no violent reactions? I mean I've reworked the story thrice and you've already made it pass a ton of chapters don't you feel anything?or did you find out I was writing a rework and skipped to the reworked chapter
ch 0 1 reworked prologue
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
or just don't, I'm not sure a rework would appeal to your tastes.
ch 0 1 author note(mental age of mc or physical age)
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
also in the rework not only do I plan to make the story more consistent, revise some event but also change the protagonist.I'll keep the personality like you said childish for like 1-2 chapters but he'll go to teenagish-young adult after a few events.just give me more critiques if your going for more specific changes tho.
ch 0 1 author note(mental age of mc or physical age)
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
ya sorry this is why I planned the rework at the end of the story. if you catch up to my lattest chapters you'll see I posted a note saying I'll rework the entire story by hand again.
ch 0 1 author note(mental age of mc or physical age)
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
I didn't realize new readers still came, regarding this issue in my latest post I wrote a note explaining that I'm planning to rework the entire series from scratch, currently the only reworked chapter i have is the prologue in the latest chapter.sorry for the problems in the reworked version I wanna rely more on myself and maybe a few grammar apps(a few, most of the grammar is from me), also I wanna make the story more consistent.
do you guys like it?
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
I do plan on romance but in different circumstances anyway won't tell to spoil the fun.
reworked prologue
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
new readers still come 😅? sorry to tell you this but I mostly relied on grammar apps when I first started(yes even when I re-edit the first draft).btw I'm planning on doing a mass rework from the ground up so reading the whole story is pretty much pointless. the rework in itself is me relying mostly on my self from my past experience, the flow of the story still goes the same but I wanna make some moderate changes. currently there's only one reworked chapter which is the largest chapter but anyway ya.i have no idea how you found this fanfic.
do you guys like it?
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
technically it's a reworked prologue(cause ya know in reworking/rewriting all my chapters) but I wanted to add some dialogue to the characters instead of copypasting from the wiki.but as the first commenter what ya think?
reworked prologue
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
I suggest don't I'm gonna need to rewrite it from scratch without coptpasting this original script and writing it from the ground up
ch 0 1 4 The first drink(re-edited-punctuation)
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
yes, cause trading my fanfic from the bottom to up I found a some things that didn't add up.I especially wanna fix the time periods and rewrite some events that people found useless
ch 0 1 decided on writing a rework likely to come out next year
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4
once iI.awhile
Deletion commences tomorrow.
Percy Jackson: Greek god of nature
Book&Literature · DaoistyNyxQ4