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Alright, seems fairly good for the first ten or so chapters. I will update the review later when there are more chapters. Writing Quality is good. There are a few grammatical mistakes, but can be easily ignored. It has been 3 days, but it seems like the Author will publish a chapter a day, so it is quite stable. Story seems interesting. Although as stated it starts generic, I can see there are a lot of interesting aspects to it. Ezio, MC, is smart, talented and crafty. I haven't really seen anything bad about it really. Side characters all have backgrounds and realness, they don't feel like NPCs. I like it so far. World Background seems really interesting. The first chapter is a big foreshadowing/spoiler I guess, but it is not too much to ruin the story. I believe this story will reach the greatness of the first chapter one day. Good Luck!