haluwari - Profile

Writing quality: Fun at first. But started to get boring fast(explain in story development). Fighting sequence is somewhat fun to read. Main casts are slightly differ from cannon. Their development don't feel forced. . Story development: No divergence from cannon. MC do not attempt to interfere and change events. And sometimes she forget about plot and go along with event.... And inconsistency remembered plot when she noticed that author add more stuffs in fighting sequence to make it more interesting than cannon. Yeah, fighting sequence is only saving grace. . Character design: Main character don't look weird or out of place. . World background: Author tends to stick closely with cannon. Hard to know how much author understand naruto's lore. But nothing break so far.