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Bebuu

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"If we can't dance like the others, then we could try to do it our own way."

My Friend and I Reincarnated Into a Tragedy Dating Game

My Friend and I Reincarnated Into a Tragedy Dating Game

Fantasy · Disgrace

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Replied to OneeSans_Shota

I could be wrong but I swear chakra is as well, in a way? Not everyone is able to use it, like Rock Lee for example. Plus chakra is stored in the body, and the only thing that gets transferred is the consciousness so they shouldn’t have access

"Chaaarrr!" Charmander shouted excitedly as he ran and pressed the Pokeball button with his own hand and got in there, shocking both the ninja and Professor Oak, who had never seen anyone able to tame a Pokemon like that!

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

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Some form of autism mayhaps?

At first, I thought this was some sort of long-running joke he played, but it turns out that's just how he was. Because why not, I guess. Maybe there was a reason he was like this, but even if there was, I at least knew that not even Nathan knew what that was.

My Friend and I Reincarnated Into a Tragedy Dating Game

My Friend and I Reincarnated Into a Tragedy Dating Game

Fantasy · Disgrace

Bebuu
Replied to Orloss

Well yes the manga is, but he doesn’t seem to be following the manga. He’s just loosely basing it off the game and then making stuff up as he goes

With all these parties generating profit, the one who would benefit most from this would be Alex, who controlled the entire production and sales ecosystem.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

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Replied to Eins_Mensch

Not really right? Unless I’m remembering wrong, Mew isn’t actually that strong it just has the dna of every Pokémon which allows it to do any move (besides Arceus’)

In the Pokemon world there were still other Pokemons that Alex was very interested in, but even though he had a lot of GP, some of these Pokemon cost tens of millions of GP, others hundreds of millions, and there was even the One Above All Pokemon, Arceus, that Pokemon alone cost more than anything Alex had ever seen in the System store, so for now he would make do with the common legendary Pokemon.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

Bebuu
Replied to iiuminox

I’m confused is this real or a joke 😭

To others, this kitten was just another Pokemon like the others in the game, but to true Pokemon fans from Alex's old world, this was practically the Jesus of Pokemon.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

Bebuu
Replied to Orloss

Technically pokemon can’t die, if he’s going to follow game rules. We’ll have to see if any of that gets brought up in the first place though

With all these parties generating profit, the one who would benefit most from this would be Alex, who controlled the entire production and sales ecosystem.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

Bebuu
Replied to Natsu_Ghazal

Yeah it seems like another major plot hole. Unless he explains that he let them use it in oasis on purpose, why are they able to use ninjutsu but the mutants can’t use their mutant powers? Or superhero’s use their powers

"Chaaarrr!" Charmander shouted excitedly as he ran and pressed the Pokeball button with his own hand and got in there, shocking both the ninja and Professor Oak, who had never seen anyone able to tame a Pokemon like that!

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

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Commented

Yet he isn’t a dragon type 😞

Mainly a little red dragon with its tail on fire.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

Bebuu
Commented

So if I’m not mistaken, this is in the past before the main series correct? Because cellphones do exist in the Naruto universe. Or at least something similar. We’ve seen background characters walk by with them before in the show.

"This, Mr. Uzumaki, is an item called a cell phone, with this device people from other worlds can communicate with anyone who also has one in their world in real time, for example, take this cell phone here." Alex said as he handed him his cell phone.

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Movies · NunuXD

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Commented

Sigh

"You'll come to this world as my familiar," Edward spoke, touching the tip of the goddess's nose.

Reluctant Hero: Damn Protagonist, Why Are You So Useless?

Reluctant Hero: Damn Protagonist, Why Are You So Useless?

Fantasy · eprins

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I’ll start by saying that I do enjoy reading this… at certain spots. I didn’t go into this expecting it to be professional, and it’s not like I think I can do better. That doesn’t mean I can’t criticize the flaws, which some are pretty major. tldr; it’s okay if you don’t think too hard, but would’ve probably been better as it’s own story rather than an MCU fanfic. Most of its major problems are including already existing characters The story is wildly inconsistent or abrupt. The author changes things, or just straight up ignores crucial plot points that he made as recently as a few chapters ago. They could easily be solved by editing the chapter, or not even exist if he simply reread the previous chapters or kept notes. It’s also so hard to read for someone who’s knows Marvel because the timelines are all wrong and characters don’t act the way you think they should. I’ll give that some slack because Marvel timeline is already screwy and this is a fanfic so I don’t expect it to be 1 to 1 anyways. But! For people who don’t know Marvel well it’s even worse because he doesn’t explain any background, even simply. So why certain crucial plot points or timelines are changed are never explained, and if you don’t have pretty decent knowledge of all the MCU it’s almost impossible to follow unless you turn your brain off and don’t think at all. Grammar is also pretty bad, but good enough as the Authors main language isn’t English. However it would be nice if he actually edited them out when people tell him it’s wrong.

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4mth
Replied to 1mZ1ad

Okay well that different if you’re still in school :p. I thought you were proudly saying you basically sit at home all day with no job or girlfriend

Normal kids his age would have already gotten a job and start looking into marriage with their partners, but not him. He was far from any of that.

I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World

I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World

Urban · Pointbreak

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So if his quest was “help a lady cross the road” but he failed to complete it he would die 🤨

[All quest issued by the system are correlated to the survival of the host in the Apocalypse. Failing to complete the quest will only end in one result, death.]

I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World

I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World

Urban · Pointbreak

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