when I think story is becoming boring ...you make it interesting ..[img=recommend]
ch 49 You Shouldn't Have Done That!
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ch 16 “Secondary Mission”
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this make story more exciting [img=nervous]
i was just frustrated and i said ...I do not have time to waste for those comments and I writing this to improve my writing thank for your opinion [img=recommend]
Your opinion is not important at all, because I write this story just for fun and please don't expect to read a neat and clean one without problems, the comments you give to improve the story are valuable, but keep the other comments to yourself.
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ch 17 Intimidation of The Weak
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I like jon[img=disgusted]
Lyanna's eyes moved to Lucifer, and she nodded faintly. ", Ned. His true name is Jon Targaryen. He is the son of Rhaegar and me!"
Book&Literature · AERIC35
why should he?
ch 19 A Sudden Twist
Book&Literature · AERIC35
his magic don't work in westros
Lucifer thought to himself Most of Ned's companions were killed except for Howland Reed, which is unfortunate, but the less people who know about Lyanna's child, the better. Howland is Lyanna's good friend and has a loyal character.
Book&Literature · AERIC35
it will be around jon for now
ch 24 A Child's Curiosity and the Book of Magic
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ch 39 Chapter 39-"Edited"
Game Of Thrones: Another Dragons
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