taco_trash

1yr

Commented

I think you should change it, for example I liked that you were thinking of making Fortassax vhagars twin that would make alot more sense as Fortassax is said to be centuries old. I also would like to see more of Keth's backstory, of how he became the Gregor clegane of viserys, and of his son bealor. but the most,in my opinion,what I want to see is the growing affection for Allicent and how it will affect Keth's relationship with Rhaenys. and I really do enjoy this story so please don't drop it[img=recommend]

ch 23 More chapters coming up

The Lost Returned

TV · CrazyDemon23

taco_trash

1yr

Commented

I think it is a very good idea man. also wanted to say that I really enjoy your story keep it up bro.

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The Lost Returned

TV · CrazyDemon23

taco_trash

2yr

Commented

mate for life btw

"Yes, beloved. Staying at the Veela colony I had some intimate moments with other Veelas and have come to appreciate it. Here also I have a few female lovers to pleasure me. This Arianne you are telling me about sounds like she and I will easily get along. So it is no problem at all for me. And her children will rule Dorne while mine will rule the Northern Realms so there will be no problem for succession."

Game of Thrones : The Northern Realms

Book&Literature · ElderKwon

taco_trash

2yr

Commented

wow got cucked

"Yes, beloved. Staying at the Veela colony I had some intimate moments with other Veelas and have come to appreciate it. Here also I have a few female lovers to pleasure me. This Arianne you are telling me about sounds like she and I will easily get along. So it is no problem at all for me. And her children will rule Dorne while mine will rule the Northern Realms so there will be no problem for succession."