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honestly i really enjoyed it until he got married to peggy, given his circumstances i just don’t think he was ready, then after the marriage it became bland, still good but i do believe it would’ve been better it romance came later

i’m not sure, the story never really goes anywhere? it’s written in an odd way, way to much monologue that u barley see anything else happen

it was fine in the beginning but when she fights shaw i lost all interest , how are you going to make the main character a COSMIC being then grossly humiliate her just because he has a power surpression? making her go through all that experience to make her so weak like she doesn’t have enhanced strength and fighting style? Author nerfs her every single arc, it’s ridiculous and forced

it’s just not for me, there’s not much power building more plot building, the mc being a kid lasts practically the whole story .

author ur marvel fic is amazing i hope the best for u and wish for future chapters in it 😊

love it so far but i wish they updated more it’s so good

this is terrible, it has such a great concept but is completely ruined by… everything. The mc is forced to be a contracted monster to a noble girl, he had no choice in it but never thought it was odd? he then doesn’t question a thing she asks and is like a fucking docile puppy? i don’t understand the point in making a MONSTER mc, NOTHUMAN!! ruined the whole thing

this story is just bad, it gets boring after 20 chapters and is terrible at plot progression. Seriously .. it’s all over the place, every chapter something new is happening and not in a good way.

**SOME SPOILERS BELOW BEWARE^**⚠️ Honestly it’s a great book, some issues here and there but I had to drop it at chapter 200. The main character and thena have a child, a boy, which becomes the new Mc. Which then just focuses on drama and gwen, his love interest. The main character pluto became too human for my liking, which is not surprising as the chapters progres there’s not much action, mainly drama, timeline progression and slice of life. He had a lot of potential to become stronger and actually focus on defeating the celestial, yet his character development and progression stops there, which is extremely unfortunate because it would’ve been more entertaining seeing him interact with the current timeline hero’s. So, overall this was a pretty disappointing read considering how far I got but anything before chapter 120 was a good read I suppose 🤷‍♂️

The concept of my two favorite things, tower climbing with an op non-human mc, yet it somehow got ruined in every way. The dialogue is so cringe i think it did genuine physical damage. The way the Mc talks is unnecessary and the use of fancy words is repetitive and consumes most of the chapters. While the plot is bland and goes in one direction, there’s barley anything known about the Mc even though he’s immortal, you think there’d be some background right? but nope, same goes for side characters or relations, a robotic story with no real progression. So overall, i’ve gained permanent frown lines from the intense frowning and my hopes crushed on a waste of this true potential story design! So unless you’re an edgelord don’t read this ⚠️[img=angry]