Great chapter!
"That's fine, and Nyx,Van, and Ven give them 2 or 3 more blessings and then leave them to their own devises"-Jack
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Thanks for the chapter!
ch 132 perfection is an old road.
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those (hsi) own age. ------his
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ch 130 A look at hygiene and more
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they (didtn) clean them------didn't
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Interesting chapter thanks!
ch 129 The Crimson pit
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her (fave) and stomach-------face
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the temperature was set (vy )Nancy -----by
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why is nancy in small
For once and possibly the only time Jack,Nancy, and the gods all had some free time, which was extremely rare when trying to watch 2 entire growing races.
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Great chapter!
ch 127 back to see the candidates
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"Alright, your task is to roam the lands in secret, protecting those who can't protect themselves and destroying those who wish to do harm to your race"-Jack
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Thanks for the chapter!
ch 125 Those that remain
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ch 123 An eye for filth
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Great chapter!
ch 122 An average galactic family
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Ofocurse different race could ------- Of course
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ch 134 The wave round 2 part 1
The Game of Evolution
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