Titus204

1yr

Replied to STRIKER0

Light probably won’t want him but Slade, who is part of light, wanted to train him. Slade dosent really care for his powers which is shown by him being intrested in Bolts skill and talent when they fought. If slade dose care it’s not a turn off if Bolt loses them for he’s just a better pick than Robin.

~I see, and then when you realize I have gone 'bad', you will find a cure or permanent nullifier for my powers,~ I replied, connecting the dots of Batman's plan. ~I suppose that's where the device Martian Manhunter is having made for me enters the equation, right? With me trying to kill you all with a scream, only to find out I have no powers, and my voice is doing nothing. Except it won't be my voice, but the sound the device Martian Manhunter is giving me makes, right?~

DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

Titus204

1yr

Commented

This is not a complaint of your template, but more of using the Garp template as a example on why templates confuse my tiny brain in fanfiction. Dose it just completely copy the powers of Garp, including physique, and is he capable of expanding the power beyond on how Garp did? Or is it just using the character as a medium to use the powers and rules of One Piece? If their’s a progression to fully use that template are you just following the path Garp had did to gain the power or is it limiting its powers to not hurt the host? When limiting its powers to not hurt the host why dose it limit passive powers like observation haki where there’s no backlash. I can go deeper into the rabbit hole, but for the final main question is why dose this even matter to me! I like your stories by the way.

And 2. Garp Template!

Flames of Justice (Completed)

Anime & Comics · Monkey_Godking

Titus204

1yr

Commented

I still enjoy the story, so all is fine and dandy for me

ch 20 Author's Note: The Worst Received Chapter

Monster Girl Quest: Eeveelution

Video Games · unfortunateGambler

Titus204

2yr

Commented

The uniform of the school was a white shirt with a black blazer above it and a black ribbon on the collar. The difference between the girl's and boy's uniform was that girls wore a red skirt with white lines and had a small black cap, while boys wore a black pair of pants.

LUSTFUL PARADISE: Shinmai cross DxD

Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI

Titus204

2yr

Commented

Toujou Jin, his father, a handsome middle-aged man, was reading the newspapers when he entered the room and nodded to him with a smile.

LUSTFUL PARADISE: Shinmai cross DxD

Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI

Titus204

2yr

Commented

She was Sapphire Toujou. No matter how much you looked at her, be it because of her appearance or her name, it was impossible to consider her as Japanese and she really wasn't one.