okay but why?
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Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
I already see one glaring problem here.. if one goes into there and kills the demon god wouldn't it already mean the person is just as strong and just as much of a threat :/ are they gonna end up getting rid of the mc when he is done too?
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Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
jojo's bizarre adventure season 2 i believe
But it wasn't actually his fault since in his perspective he woke up only when Rick was about to force himself on Dina. Before that he felt as if his consciousness was floating in nothingness. However, the part where he tore out Rick's heart was totally him and was nothing new to him.
Fantasy · Resurgent
tbh i dont see how this is going but I don't mind entirely
ch 0 2 Finding the light: The beginning
Fantasy · SweeetPotato
Literally no one would say that
"Hic! Cutie." The drunkest among them, staggered in his drunken state and grinned wickedly as he looked at Barbara: "How about playing with these uncles here. We have money, you are the typical delinquent girl who does everything for money, right?" He saw that she had the air of a delinquent, especially with how she dressed, and said with undisguised lust.
Fantasy · Lruska
It gives the impression that the author is probably 16
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Letter of Recommendation
Fantasy · Lruska
The author tries to make the mc look cool but it just makes it extremely cringe. "Omg look how cold he looks" "wow he seems so aloof and cool" like no tf?
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Letter of Recommendation
Fantasy · Lruska
Okay thats great! I will look forward to the rewrite then!
hmm? The rings and now this? Author wyd?
"Stay safe Sara." Jace acknowledged her with a nod before gripping Malia's hand and leaving.
Fantasy · TofSpades
Grammar could use some work. It could easily be fixed with a extension like grammarly.
ch 0 1 Here I Come!
Urban · HaoShu
Not sure what to say here but keep in mind 24/25 of the reviews are just spam of random characters and emotes instead of actual reviews.. Take what you will from that but it certainly doesn't give me a good impression of the author for not deleting bs reviews like that.
A Goddess' Wish (Dropped)
Anime & Comics · Xeranas