stary_nights - Profile

haven't reviewed this in a while so here i am! i love how the story is going so far and the more recent chapters are just amazing! i think the way you're writing this story is so realistic and i love how cordelia isn't just some spineless mc but an amazing strong force to be reckoned with

tom- nooo you little shit how could you do that to an innocent little animal, that's so wrong. but at the same time i love how you're not making tom uwu like some other people do and are actually showing how he really was

omg love the new installment! the way lia talks to nix is so relatable lol i do that all the time with my pets, it just helps to think out loud

ahh omg i never would have expected that twist in the story! like i knew that he was kinda sketch but the fact that he was the killer?! insane! such a good plot twist!

Dark Paradise was honestly the BEST Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read on here and now that Light Purgatory is out I'm expecting great things from our author!

Your story is very good. It has a good plot and the characters are written nicely. I think that you need to work a little on background building but except for that you're doing a great job

I think your story is pretty great! It is well written and the plot is unique, something i personally haven't read before, i also like the relations between the characters and the way they're written and portrayed

just small things like grammar and pacing, but you can fix that with an editor

This story was a comeplling read. I can tell you put a lot of effort into it. Your writing style could use a little improvement but its nothing too bi so you don't have to worry. Overall your plot is also pretty great. Good job!

you are really good at writing, i love how you describe things and paint the picture i think your characters are also unique and well developed and overall the story is great