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this is so disgusting first the mc is a simp towards Freya (she ignores him for a long time and surely the mc com simp will seriously forgive her this is making me sick to the point that I want to vomit I feel like she controls him and also the mc knows Danmachi's story you have to intuit that you shouldn't trust her but no, he's just another simpleton who does what she tells him) I don't like this where she's going, she's going to commit the same things she did with the detail that he's going to accept her because of how things are going damn simple what a disgusting story (on top of that she's going to become stronger than her and he's going to forgive her for ignore it as I see it, this is so cliche and very confusing since she will surely want to try it if it is worthy of her and that is very degrading) These are all my theories based on what I read and what this suggests is that the MC is another simp from Freya's family and that is pathetic. If I'm honest, I say stop translating and do it however you like the story because it seems like nothing has an impact on the story (I was attracted to the concept of everyone's evil and I thought there would be good character development with the anguish of carrying with this ability and see Angra's memories and adding depth to the character and thus being immune to Freya's charm due to what he saw and not being able to see almost anything) and when this improves you can delete this review

I think I'm going to vomit from what I just read, it's a crappy story. The story begins something that hooks you a little but everything is ruined with the character called Lilith (I want to vomit, I've never known something so disgusting to read) and I hate her as much as he does. mc (who repeats the thoughts about her over and over again, how tiring she is and how tremendously simple she is like that) psychologically tortures the mc and he instantly forgives her, she gives the protagonist (alec) a tremendous gift and the mc gives him something that can kill him and more psychological torture and he forgives her (and it disgusts her a lot) when he knows perfectly well that she has a login system that can give them better things and he forgets and thinks "oh she gave me this and I feel sorry for her I forgive her" The mc has suffered from brain damage or something. If the author does not completely rewrite Lilith, there is no way for readers to be comfortable with her.

WARNING THIS STORY HAS NTR I have no idea how to start this but I have to because it is very annoying topic for me It is about the ntr (how I hate this, this raging garbage genre) that is in this story, although it seems ambiguous, it can be interpreted as "the fiancée cheats on the mc" which surprises me at the courage you had to write this but what I could not avoid note is that you did not give warning (also the plot is somewhat repetitive and cliche of Chinese novel loser becomes strong but hides his strength, the MC is the only one who can break his destiny which leaves the rest as puppets or npc and it seems that the The world is not fully alive and although I would have liked a grayer world, I see that it will not be possible when you put a line between the "good" and the "bad" which loses the freedom factor if the rest follow the plot which it makes it boring if the mc knows how the heroines will act) I am a little disappointed (and adding the fact that it is progressing very slowly in my opinion) and this was going to be a comment but I think I am obliged to give you a star to put a warning about the ntr so I apologize in advance (I do I will delete when you put a warning or change the plot a bit or remove the topic of the ntr from the story) because there are very aggressive people on the topic of the ntr is to avoid unnecessary hate postscript: this is my secondary account and it is very likely that I will not answer you or it will take a long time to connect

WARNING THERE IS SLIGHT VIOLATION (the author gave a vague warning see this story with this warning) So much potential thrown away and all for not putting at least a warning that there will be a slight violation (groping and that kind of thing I don't know if there was insertion but I got so sick that I didn't want to finish reading the chapter my stomach turned from how disgusting that was felt) and honestly it was unnecessary but what disappointed me most was that "warning" that honestly is very vague and the disgusting thing about the scene by God is a minor is very sick (although everything they have to do with it is sick) I honestly put this comment due to lack of communication, because of the horrible scene and to give a better warning and not something And surely I will leave this account so as not to have anything to do with this story I seriously got sick with this (you were doing so well what a disappointment)