The writing style gets confusing, you don't know if the writing is referring to the MCs thoughts or something else. Doesn't do justice for the name of the novel, you seriously consider the time line where the story takes place it lasts a few months at most the rest is in his imagination towards the end. Serious accusations on other novels when this own novel is such a subpar work.
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The writing style gets confusing, you don't know if the writing is referring to the MCs thoughts or something else. Doesn't do justice for the name of the novel, you seriously consider the time line where the story takes place it lasts a few months at most the rest is in his imagination towards the end. Serious accusations on other novels when this own novel is such a subpar work.
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Eastern · MotivatedSloth