De_Wayne_Poates

how can one chew thier own throat?

while I am enjoying the story so far, the grammer errors are too many.

why is he not signing in each day for tokens?

short chapter cost this much?

cat person = fairy race, ? feline race, monster girl

This thread of the plot is not logical or practical. It is disconnected. The team has betrayed mc without any recourse.

another non-chapter charge, webnovel sure is milking every concept to screw over readers!

chatacter intergty is not being maintained, while chatacter names are being switch around confusing the story line. otherwise i enjoy it.

I doubt that very much.. You wish to instigate further commentary?