I'm really so hooked into this story. I didn't find any grammatical errors. The flow of the story's nice. The characters also good. I suggest you should update 2-3 more chaps per week but still I don't want to pressure It's just an advice. The world bg is also good, i can literally imagine it.
Fantasy · Rei_Manunulat
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I'm really so hooked into this story. I didn't find any grammatical errors. The flow of the story's nice. The characters also good. I suggest you should update 2-3 more chaps per week but still I don't want to pressure It's just an advice. The world bg is also good, i can literally imagine it.
A Poisonous Kiss Of A Siren
Fantasy · Rei_Manunulat