Your story was absolutely great, the world building was good, most readers sure loved it, but put something as weird as the protagonist's friend taking his wife and the protagonist accepting it? yes buddy, that was silly, it cut off a large part of the audience, I'm sorry you don't see that, and I'm even sadder because I really liked the novel up to this point, it was unnecessary. There was different ways to make the path of the protagonist hard, but well, the novel is yours re, I was just a reader, I can make a review (as I do) and you may think I'm an idiot for this, so anyway, good luck in future works.
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The story was very good, until the author for some reason decided to throw everything in the trash with the betrayals from chapter 271. The MC discovers the betrayal of his wife and friend and does nothing, I'm dropping this story, a pity ...it had potential, but the author is a complete idiot
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Your story was absolutely great, the world building was good, most readers sure loved it, but put something as weird as the protagonist's friend taking his wife and the protagonist accepting it? yes buddy, that was silly, it cut off a large part of the audience, I'm sorry you don't see that, and I'm even sadder because I really liked the novel up to this point, it was unnecessary. There was different ways to make the path of the protagonist hard, but well, the novel is yours re, I was just a reader, I can make a review (as I do) and you may think I'm an idiot for this, so anyway, good luck in future works.
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Fantasy · Keikokumars