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Bro just hit em with a United States of smash but WAY stronger😭
The entire arena erupts into dust and stone as the walls of the stadium crack.
MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
She clasps her hands together. "Satoru Gojo and Naohiro Zenin are here! Would it be strange to ask for an autograph!? *KYA* My fanfiction is almost done. I need to meet them to get their personalities just right!"
Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
Obviously. But you entirely skipped over what I said and my point. My point was that luffy, if he had not eaten his devil fruit, would have grown far stronger than he was before he set sail in the original, not that that luffy would be stronger than maki.
I knew I am not the strongest. But at least I am far more stronger than Luffy when he set sailed from romance dawn island.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
Someone say ‘special’?
Ryu speaks with a crazy smile. "YOU BOTH TRULY ARE A DESSERT! [Granite Missile]!"
Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
Would he be able to enter jackpot or would that only be when he uses his domain and uses hakaris CT?
Yuta reinforced the train door, held on to it as a makeshift weapon, and slapped him across the face.
Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
I like how it shows her behind him but when she lands it she’s infront, her speed is so immense sukuna can’t keep up😭
Is Miwa stronger in Shinjuku because of training, or is she weaker due to her binding vow?
Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
'Yes, there is a 0.000000001 % chance of master rescuing her father without getting dragged into that worse fate.'
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
More character development for me ig(This won’t even be a dent compared to the stuff I’ve seen)
Warning ⚠️: If you have a weak heart, skip this chapter.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
You know what? I’m not gonna question it…
You will face extreme punishment from Gingerland that will be taxing not only physically but also break your mind completely. But if you managed to survive and retain your sanity and will, then your conqueror's haki will be three times more strong than it is now.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
Then, there is another event, called 'animal mating event' . Mostly beautiful slaves were forced into the events, where other selected slaves were sent to rape them. The one who faints first usually dies. But according to the slave who gave me this information, my chances of getting into that game was really low because of my scars.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
There were other events like the double devil event where the celestial Dragons force their slaves to eat two devil fruits and watch them explode.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
It seems in one piece(most of the time) important things like shirts and pants(if they are important to the wearer) just don’t break, the best case being luffys sandals, those must be made of vibranium or smth.
I checked my condition. My top was completely gone leaving my breasts without any cover. I had so focused on swimming that I didn't even realised it. I didn't know why, but I have a feeling that I have some kind of enemity with tops. Even back in the dawn Island, I always used to lose my tops even in the most basic accidents. Fortunately I still had my pants. Although, they were nothing more than rags, at least they wear doing their job of hiding my privates. Fortunately I had not lost my compass. It was a miracle that I even found this Island. My sea chart was lost in the ocean during the storm. So I had to relay on my memories and the compass to reach this island. The bracelet in my right wrist was also intact.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
Nah, I’d Look East.
I looked towards the East where Sun was rising slowly. But the orange glow was really illuminating the entire ocean.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
Hitting a black flash is less rare than that bruh😭(side note will she be able to hit black flashes in the future? Ik this one ff that makes it so when the Mc times the beat of their heart with a hit, it makes it so their strength gets increased massively for that hit, just a suggestion.)
'Yes, there is a 0.000000001 % chance of master rescuing her father without getting dragged into that worse fate.'
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
I’m pretty sure without his df luffy would have grown a lot stronger before he set sail, because although he did get into a lot of fights, he did have backup. And plus he was mostly focused on training his df, not making time for physical stuff aside from fighting. But that’s just my opinion.
I knew I am not the strongest. But at least I am far more stronger than Luffy when he set sailed from romance dawn island.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
Thick time skip
Eight years later
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
Woopslaps dad(or grandpa idk)
But this time, one of the arrogant kids, Goopslap decided to show others that he is superior and went to the forest to hunt a boar and prove it to other.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
Literally at that.
But at least it was better than suddenly having two mountains on my chest.
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
One thing I suggest is going into detail about the torture scenes, spreading out small details and the Mcs thoughts, it doesn’t have to be too much but it will help the readers and the Mc in making the revenge arc that much more enjoyable. I think describing the r@pe scene better and making it longer and more cruel instead of saying the Mc did something to herself and made her keep her sanity intact, what I recommend(if you’re planning on more r@pe scenes in the future) is going over the MCs thoughts and how painful instead of pleasurable it feels to be done in such a way. Sorry for the rant, I do not expect you to improve your writing to reach masterful levels in such a short time, these are just recommendations for future works and when you have lots of experience under your belt. Hope you have a good day.
ch 26 The real test of will power (18+)
One piece Sigma System
Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd